Bureau and the Beast Chapter 4/?

[evilinsanemonkey]

The Bureau and the Beast (8037 words) by flashforeward
Chapters: 5/?
Fandom: Eerie Indiana
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Marshall Teller, Simon Holmes, Dash X (Eerie Indiana), Winston Chisel, Bartholomew Radford, Al (Eerie Indiana), Lodgepoole (Eerie Indiana), Mr. Lodgepool, Original Characters, Original Male Character(s)
Additional Tags: The Bureau of Lost, Mega Voodoo Eerie Weirdness (Eerie Indiana), Mystery, Peter Pan References, Psychological Drama, more questions than answers
Series: Part 2 of The Bureau of Lost
Summary:

Dash X is on to something, Marshall Teller is, too. Coming from opposite directions, both find themselves being led to the conclusion that the answers they seek are in the one place they’re forbidden to go: the Bureau of Lost. Meanwhile, Simon Holmes has dreams tugging him back to Neverland and the Lost Boys. Can they find out who’s pulling the strings before they lose Simon and their memories, or is it already too late?

Chapter Four

Comments

[froodle]

Clotho only smiled, too many teeth bright in the flourescent light

Instantly upsetting, I love it

[froodle]

they'll eraserize my brain

I love how extremely Marshall this line is!

[froodle]

Harley made breakfast. Which is to say, Harley poured cereal into bowls and spilled Milk on the counter, but Simon appreciated the effort.

😍😍😍

[froodle]

Oh my gosh, Peter in this is absolutely the little horror that he was in the book, I LOVE IT

[evilinsanemonkey]

The Fates remain Most Terrifying

[evilinsanemonkey]

I love playing with Eerie-speak

[evilinsanemonkey]

The Holmes Brothers are so wholesome (even if one might be an anti-christ)

[evilinsanemonkey]

After I read the book I couldn't write him any other way xD

[froodle]

I remember the first time I read it, sitting in the library at Rushen Primary and feeling a kind of silent creeping fear at the description of him gnashing his perfect beautiful teeth. Delightful, in the most horrid way.