Went back to One note for my stories

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Here is the intro. I kind of started writing past the intro... excited for the story to unfold.. tell me what y'all think mmkay?

Sam

Comments

[froodle]

I really like the opening sentence; it rings like the sort of thing mars would say in the opening of an episode.

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Thank you. :-)

[froodle]

:D