Eerie Indiana Drabble: Critical Reception

[froodle]

"The kids would love it," said Harley, spinning the Professor like a fuzzy red-eyed top and making the untidy piles of paper around him flutter with the motion. "Butts are inherently funny when you're a kid."

"You'd get great reviews from the Wilson Twins," Sara Sue said, reaching out to steady a stack of pages that looked ready to topple from the centrifugal force of Prof. Moth's breakdancing. "They called your last story collection 'intellectually inaccessible' because you had a character that was a cross between a bat and a bowl of pudding."

Harley nodded.

"Poor Puddious Baby," he agreed.

Ongoing Verse: Pay Attention



Awesome Pay Attention fanart commissioned by Lipstickcat and drawn by Misusart

Preparations by froodle. Winston Chisel, the morning he became Mayor.

Lost and Found, in which the Unkind Ones honour one of their own

The Storm by froodle, in which Mayor Chisel has a very specific job for Eerie's resident weatherman

Cygnet, in which Lillian and Harley visit the lake

Divergent, in which Dash and Harley have a conversation

Still, in which there is weather

Night Watch, in which it is Halloween, and Sara Sue is carving

Blue by froodle: Sara Sue and Marilyn Teller in the laundry room.

Reflection by froodle: Sara Sue in Paris.

Hereditary, in which the Bob Brothers experiment

The Paper Witch, in which something comes looking for Sara Sue

Advisor, in which Harley talks to a bird, and then to a ghost

Pay Attention Part 1 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 2 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 3 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 4 by froodle

Echoes by froodle: the worlds where Simon and Marshall stayed are very different

Pay Attention Part 5 by froodle

Onward, in which Sara Sue shares her favourite artwork with the boys

Pay Attention Part 6 by froodle

Exhumed, in which there is activity at the lake

Pay Attention Part 7 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 8 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 9 by froodle

Pay Attention Part 10 by froodle

Civil Disobedience by froodle, in which Sara Sue objects most strenuously to the Mayor's behaviour

Pay Attention: Coda by froodle

Christmas Morning by froodle; takes place in the Pay Attention-verse, after the main story

Obsolete, in which Sara Sue finally gets reacquainted with her home town

Sculpture by froodle, in which Sara Sue must face off against the forces of municipal artwork

Remodelling, in which there is a verandah

Deck the Halls, in which Sara Sue and Harley have another Christmas

Sunset, in which Sara Sue wants a dog

Signing, in which there is a chaffinch, and a lime, and a dog

Comments

[evilinsanemonkey]

lmao

[froodle]

Bert and Ernie have really odd tastes in literature